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unwrapping
in the unproven atmosphere of the morning after the last morning
i start opening the closed curtain of the senses
a hydrogen-sunlight-burnt-cocktail of luminescent-tooth-yellow, cool strips
unfold up the west wall
darkening only for shadow of poet
as he walks by, all woke up inside of emotional bullshit to moan about the morning as it undresses
and asks you questions.
well, I would not
call it bad, I found it interesting. I suppose the the reference "bad poem man" is that the "shadow poet" is a personal reflection about someone else?
darkening only for shadow of poet
as he walks by, all woke up inside of emotional bullshit to moan about the morning as it undresses
and asks you questions.
This is not bad at all... There is alot going on here and as I always say I leave it to the reader to absorb the message and determine on ther own what the poet may or may not mean in the piece.
As far as "bad poem man", pardon the reference to your "tag"here is
the authoritative collection of all time "bad poems" by, Dominic Bevan Wyndham Lewis, The Stuffed Owl, which he co-edited with Charles Lee. This anthology of 'bad verse' is justly famous as being one of the funniest of all poetry collections, featuring William Wordsworth, Robert Southey, Edgar Allan Poe and many others at considerably less than their best.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Thank you so much for the
Thank you so much for the words. I feel a little bad since the tag is just sort of an afterthought for me personally, sort of a "throwing of the bone" to my own personality.
That said, I did not know about "bad poems," so I'm definitely going to have to check that out.
Thanks again!