Begging Me To Forget Her

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August 2012

Alone with some rolled, locked door in my home,

feeling something so i eject it in a poem,

or grab my acoustic to play it out in song,

in the end all i pretend is i'm not alone,

 

most nights i wish we never touched,

wished i didn't like you this much,

or know how it felt to be together,

my closest friends are begging me to forget her,

 

how can i not remember what we had?

even if the ending was nice, still it's bad,

adding another near fatal wound to my scars,

as i open them all up after a night out at bars,

 

never gonna hurt me, once you said it,

why'd i believe you? it was i who let it,

get to the point where i may need a medic,

cause i can't handle all the post-us stresses.

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smlee89's picture

I really enjoyed reading

I really enjoyed reading this. I can tell it came from a deep place, a place that most can relate to. Well written.

Silver__lining's picture

thanks for the read and

thanks for the read and comment #:^)


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S74rw4rd's picture

Good poem!

I just went through a similar experience on January 2.  You describe it very, very well.


Starward

Silver__lining's picture

all i can hope is i brought

all i can hope is i brought nothing but hope and awknowledgement that no matter what, you are a great person. dont live on the past, or the last great one, live for the one who will overcome all of your past and create a new future with you. dont trust on destiny to bring her to you, go out and live a life that you can be proud of and she will find you


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impyshideout's picture

I can relate to this. I like

I can relate to this. I like your writes. I don't often comment. But now that I know how much you like them, I'll be sure to comment more...

Silver__lining's picture

and i promise to always thank

and i promise to always thank you for your comments. even bad opinions, i like any types


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impyshideout's picture

I don't usually voice bad

I don't usually voice bad opinions but okay...

Silver__lining's picture

seriously, bad opinions are

seriously, bad opinions are usually good because it helps me see how i can improve. any feedback is appreciated


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impyshideout's picture

Alright I'll see what I can

Alright I'll see what I can do. But I really don't know the first thing about writing. I just write. 

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its the same for me. i just

its the same for me. i just write with no sure path just set out and see where my pen takes me


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