Alone with some rolled, locked door in my home,
feeling something so i eject it in a poem,
or grab my acoustic to play it out in song,
in the end all i pretend is i'm not alone,
most nights i wish we never touched,
wished i didn't like you this much,
or know how it felt to be together,
my closest friends are begging me to forget her,
how can i not remember what we had?
even if the ending was nice, still it's bad,
adding another near fatal wound to my scars,
as i open them all up after a night out at bars,
never gonna hurt me, once you said it,
why'd i believe you? it was i who let it,
get to the point where i may need a medic,
cause i can't handle all the post-us stresses.
I really enjoyed reading
I really enjoyed reading this. I can tell it came from a deep place, a place that most can relate to. Well written.
thanks for the read and
thanks for the read and comment #:^)
can you hear me now?
Good poem!
I just went through a similar experience on January 2. You describe it very, very well.
Starward
all i can hope is i brought
all i can hope is i brought nothing but hope and awknowledgement that no matter what, you are a great person. dont live on the past, or the last great one, live for the one who will overcome all of your past and create a new future with you. dont trust on destiny to bring her to you, go out and live a life that you can be proud of and she will find you
can you hear me now?
I can relate to this. I like
I can relate to this. I like your writes. I don't often comment. But now that I know how much you like them, I'll be sure to comment more...
and i promise to always thank
and i promise to always thank you for your comments. even bad opinions, i like any types
can you hear me now?
I don't usually voice bad
I don't usually voice bad opinions but okay...
seriously, bad opinions are
seriously, bad opinions are usually good because it helps me see how i can improve. any feedback is appreciated
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Alright I'll see what I can
Alright I'll see what I can do. But I really don't know the first thing about writing. I just write.
its the same for me. i just
its the same for me. i just write with no sure path just set out and see where my pen takes me
can you hear me now?