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Wait On A Lost Soul
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June 2011 Every breath of every hour i pretend i'm someone i'm not,
the lessons are the questions since i wasn't properly taught,
no birds pickin in flowers, no damn stingin bees,
never got that sayin since both are more male less fees,
no alcohol for me i am over that drink,
never gonna happen, de ja vu, from where? lemme think,
won't speak her name is my last decision,
but she is the girl who helped me get rid of religion,
all that Sunday school crap was always a bore,
plus Ahh-men to me makes me wanna snore,
Catholic schools picked on me, public let me be,
those bastards missed out on Norton and bought cheap McAfee,
so i will easily break through their security,
kill em all and bury their bodies under some wavin trees,
all just a dream, inception is reality,
wait til you see who this lost soul turns out to be.
this is an exceptional write!
this one stands out most so far, i like the way you handled religion I abhor it myself especially when its so closed minded. How could such a wonderous God keep such closed council and dictorials? Nah. I'm all for the spirit of the law! and Jesus was a big rebel he did things that the churches couldnt hack because they were the right things to do. and were bound to be human about our enlightenment... So yeah God made provisions for it. this is a very great poem, of course my spiritual views are different but some similarities in the way the Church has treated its innocents theres this really good link that sort of says some of this stuff. but if you are anti christian message you might not want to see it. but I thought it was really interesting and raised some really great points on why we are all losing our religion.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1IAhDGYlpqY
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."