You laid down the bait,
i ate it by the crate,
starting spending money on dates,
from my wallet to your plate,
why pick you up at eight?
together never late,
i thought you were so great,
fell victim to fate,
fell under the weight,
now it's you that's easy to hate.
At this rate,
i'll never again want a mate,
just walk dogs and skate,
smoke, sip and carry my weight,
even if my pounds happen to abate,
even if i pack up and leave this state,
you'll always hear my heart rate,
a beat that you alone create,
started fresh with a dirty slate,
the ending was never something to debate,
much like a balloon that deflates,
on air you can relate,
relationships you'll never translate,
since you've killed the beat and fed the hate.
This is an awsome poem! Loved all the ideas
This has a real hurt vernacular vein through it with a touch of spite excell a very affective write! Well done! :) congrats SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."