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Whispers in the night

Pictures of the past

Tear drops on the ground

Knowing it wouldn’t last



Shivers in the morning

Deep eyes so full of fright

Finding it hard to believe

That it wasn’t a dream last night



Sounds of him sobbing softly

As he hides beneath his arm

Comforting words don’t soothe him

If anything they cause more harm



The tears stop falling that night

But the pain still stains his heart

Next time he wont be so stupid

Next time he wont even start



But he always leans on the sky

He always soars in the stars

He looks up to the horizon

He cries to hide his scars

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S74RW4RD's picture

This poem very elegantly

This poem very elegantly describes the contours and difficulties of my three worst years, but your languages articulates the experience much better than I have ever been able (or ever will be able) to do.  I still have nightmares about them once in a while.  However, the poem is comforting in that it reminds me that the experience is not so singular as it, at times, seemed---when I was far too mature to put it into the context of a long view.


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redbrick's picture

In that time and place found

In that time and place found long sleeved shirts to hide the scars well enough. Until the time that scars were seen as badges of surviving battles and war, a kind of honour.


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S74RW4RD's picture

I think that is a very wise

I think that is a very wise interpretation.


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