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Fantasy ♥۞
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Once I saw a sweet dream,
We sat down beside a brim.
When you touched my hands,
Flowers bloomed on low lands!
You whispered into my ear,
How lovely then blew the air!
It just concussed my heart,
You have become my very part.
I was about to pluck a flower,
Then it started a heavy shower.
I told you, apple of my eye!
You told me, don't you feel shy?
You consummated whole my life,
Though I live under a hive.
And I love you its not lie-
For you always I'm ready to die.
Very beautiful. I felt lost in the imagery and moments of the poem.
Beautiful poem, one of the best I've seen in a while.
oh, it's so sweet! i really like your poems!
and thank u for the critique you wrote for me :)
have a beautiful day!:) Viki
ver ver beautiful ^^
That poem is amazing.
really gave me tingles xxx
Wow. *speechless*
This is sweet and i do like it, i think that "then it started a heavy shower" sounds a little bit awkward but overall very good