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Why the blue sky is covered with black cloud?
Why the shore less emptiness crying so loud?
To many people the rain has become so romantic,
But the dripping rain to me is nothing but pathetic.
Round water drops try to pierce the loneliness-
How can it bring the sweet dreams of happiness?
The frolic wind along with rain, tries to sibilate-
Just impossible, it will fail my pain to mitigate.
Panic moments buried in heart knows no bound,
Rain can not erase them by making hissing sound.
Nobody knows how much I hate the rain,
Please don't come again to increase my pain.
Not possible for me to tolerate the rain, it's true-
'Cause it reminds me the fulgent memory of you.
Now there is no way for me to touch your hand-
You are sleeping, yet the rain able to kiss that land!
Now a day I will always fail to give you a tricky flip,
You are there, lying in peace, having a sound sleep.
I call you again and again but you don't reply-
Your silence gives me a lot of sorrow supply!
You loved the rain, and the silence absolute,
I found no one who could be your substitute.
And I have to live rest of life, with all my pain-
I feel, sky is shedding tears in the form of rain.
I like that you dedicated this poem to your friend, it's a mark of true friendship and that is an honest source of inspiration. And after reading your friend's comment about it I understand this poem better. These are my favorite lines because it paints a mental picture of your bond:
Now there is no way for me to touch your hand-
You are sleeping, yet the rain able to kiss that land!
You are a wonderful poet who thinks of his friends. will continue to read more of your poetry.
Luck to you,
Cass♥
i really like this one
This was a beautiful poem i like your writing style.to answer you question the reason it was blank,was because i was trying to organize my poemz a-z!My folderz wouldent show up less i write something in them.I do have knew poemz i posted though.I have 158 that you can read if you want.have a nice day...
What a truely beautiful piece of poetry! And you have dedicated it to me! What an honour, thank you so very much Shawon, you are such a lovely friend.
It is so great to have such wonderful friends, I feel blessed to have people in my life that care so much, I nearly cried reading this and I would definitely have cried had I not been still on the slightly hypomanic side! (Got my meds today though, so after a whole weekend without I can finally get back on schedule and become even more well again - HOORAH!).
Keep one eye on the inbox mate 'cos I'll be emailing you soon! Thanx again for dedicating this amazing poem to me,
'leesh x