My Sometimes

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My sometimes are always sometimes

When I say sometimes, you take it as ‘may not’

When I want to talk to you

You have some other business to do

So I prefer to move away…. And better I do not

Sometimes I really need to touch you

You move aways to the other world

Leaving me in the midst of emptimess

Never look back

Never want to know what happened next

Sometimes I shout facing towards the sky

O lord! can you sometimes hear me, please?

I get no reply!

I wish, sometimes I would get the reply.

Sometimes I think if I would not born

Sometimes I think if I would never love you

Sometimes I think if I would never be existed

The sky remains silent

The rain has its own motion

Rivers pretend to be the time

And I come out of the podium, barefooted

My sometimes become a new sometimes.  

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18 may 2021 

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patriciajj's picture

"The sky remains silent The

"The sky remains silent

The rain has its own motion

Rivers pretend to be the time

And I come out of the podium, barefooted

My sometimes become a new sometimes."

 

That's some striking word-crafting! The shift from a state of gripping despair frozen in time to an emergence into something new (my sense is hope) is a stroke of brilliance. Wonderful work. 

allets's picture

Thank You For Sharing Fine Words

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A good poem. "The rain has its own motion" - Yes, it does! Best wishes for health and peace.
~S~ 
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