Alucard is a poser. He wants to bite me.
I want to suck his blood.
He came in uninvited and ate all my garlic bread.
I'm really desserts out.
Too many sweets.
Was it a cat I saw?
Meh, it stays the same. However you put it.
Just like MoM, or DaD's racecar.
We all know Dennis.
If you dont know Dennis you may not be alive.
But does Dennis exist?
Or was he created by. . .
Lets not think about that.
Ill just be asking for more desserts.
Well have to wait.
Until we can no longer evil.
I mean live.
Sharmaine Marie
NOV 5 2012 7:28 PM
Interesting and cute. You've
Interesting and cute. You've Got style lady.
Thank You
thanks, I didnt think anyone would really like it, but I gave it a shot. :) Ill be sure to look at your stuff.
Can never think of what to say. Contradiction Incarnate.
A lonely contradiction. Contrasola
A very enjoyable read ... Had
A very enjoyable read ... Had tried something similar long time ago ( Needless to say, my audience thought it was ridiculous :P )
Liked the Dennis & the desserts reference ... well in sync with the poem ...
He who knoweth himself ... knoweth the world ....
Enjoyed!?!
Wow you enjoyed it? Makes me want to write more. Thanks for the feedback. Ill be sure to look at yours!
Can never think of what to say. Contradiction Incarnate.
A lonely contradiction. Contrasola
racecar
This is fun. What do you call a word that is spelled the same backward and foreward? Funny write with the reverses - I was laughing even though the poem was dracula and stressed and sinned /serious - (stella/allets - not the one on google) - smile~~~Lady A
Palindromes
They are called Palindromes. And I meant for it to be a little humorous, but serious at the same time. (contridictions, I love em') So its good you laughed. thanks for the feedback.
Can never think of what to say. Contradiction Incarnate.
A lonely contradiction. Contrasola
this girl knows some things
Palindromes. Perfectly arranged like neat little desserts. This is total originality. Well done
what other devices are up your sleeve? Show us with a poem