Dancing On Black Ice

The snow commands white,

So cleansing and pure...

While I dance on black ice,

Feeling like a failure.



I guess my life's like,

Kinda what black ice's like.

Slippery, hazardous, and risky...

I never meant to

Welcome such trickery.



Dancing on black ice

The thrill insofar feels right.

But there's something not so nice

Brewing, breeding, festering.

Perhaps we will see tonight...

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I guess my life's like,
Kinda what black ice's like.
Slippery, hazardous, and risky...
I never meant to
Welcome such trickery.
so great poem you added here new...really making me enjoy it more and more and more.. the above stanza with contrast but realistic way is perfect and meaningfull with different lines... I really like this poem and add this to my favorite of your poemes too.... wahhh my best friend... you are really wining my heart brain and soul..