As your thoughts
Turn a blank haze
The depths of your mind
Fall victim to time.
As you begin to picture
Your life in another world
You begin
To slowly slip
Into your
Day dreams
When your eyes
Begin to stray
The cracks in the walls
Fade as you blink them all away
Ya know, even now after we have said our final goodbye I still find myself thinking of you. Not in the way I used to veiw you, but the way that we've matured together over the past couple of years. I miss our old friendship, befor it got complicated. The days just spent at the back of chapel high as all fuck. well I'm writting this just to clear my head. Call if you ever wana. I'm probly going to relapse tonight since i just gor a bag of heroin. I'm going to rehab in Spokane for 45 days. all right, um bye.
well, so far youre poems are pretty good, though i really dont like the super-short endings. also, are you a cutter? im just curious cause i am. very interesting name, wirtz. its german isnt it? or maybe austrian-hungarian? either way its from somewhere around there. oh, and you copied the name of one of my poems(sorta, more like a strange suicide note that was never realized) and isnt it amazing the tricks your eyes can play on you( like making the lines in walls disappear.) well, peace. salaam.
heh heh ace, its so true!
Yeah and thanks for putting a comment on mine, its based on a true story believe it or not =P
We ARE alike! ost of your poems are similar to what I would usually write, keep in touch =D