Exposed

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2009

Butterly stitches

are the best I can do

I tape together the corners

match the seams

but through tiny rips

and miniscule tears

the inner workings

still slip out

I am naked

exposed

empty

bare

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Afzal Shauq's picture

let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess indeed , love you and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq