Helpless

Crushed.

 

Torn.

 

One side struggles as the other carries on.

 

One has their eyes drawn to life controlling technology as the other stares into their eyes.

 

One can't hear as the other speaks. 

 

One is hurting. 

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This is so true in a lot of

This is so true in a lot of relationships. I have even felt it with my girlfriend before many times. We get so wrapped up in all the distractions in life that we miss those important moments that could be had.  Good write. 


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

SH95's picture

It pretty much ended mine, I

It pretty much ended mine, I had all the time in the world but its gotta work both ways 

This is my way of venting and raging haha

life_used_to_be_lifelike's picture

we all need our channels.

we all need our channels. Poetry is absolutely mine as well. My hands always say it better then my mouth. I like your other stuff too, so continue to rant and rave!


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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Poetry is a different world,

Poetry is a different world, especially considering the illiterate douche bags I find myself dating :)

Just been reading your stuff and damn do I understand! 

Look forward to reading more :)

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You will definitely find some

You will definitely find some of those on this site too. I stay away. Thank you for checking me out! Feel free to critique and comment :)


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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ahh whats this mean? this is great

SH95's picture

And in a way the effects of

And in a way the effects of technology on a generation 

SH95's picture

How someone can be so unaware

How someone can be so unaware of how the others feeling I guess

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You're awesome.   Thanks for the reply.