when hell freezes

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Sgdoherty

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You said, "when hell freezes over,"

Well, I went there and the walls were lined with frost,

I looked around the barren expanse

and I found all the souls to be lost,

Satan looked to be long gone;

I don't think I would have ever found him there,

I looked up at crystal-like icicles,

And let out my cry of despair.

For, you told me once, a long time ago,

You told me as we looked at the stars above,

"Only when hell freezes over,

will you ever lose my love."

25 May 2015 - 6:41pm — SirWigglesAlot

Wow, I really liked this. I especially liked the ending. Keep up the great work.

26 May 2015 - 4:46pm — Sgdoherty

That really means a lot to me

25 May 2015 - 10:31am — THWYALG

Thats actually really incredible. Great poem :)

26 May 2015 - 4:47pm — Sgdoherty

so much. That is really kind of you.