Immediately after the moment of my death,
my soul will receive its first fully spiritual breath
of eternity spent with Christ in Paradise;
as from my dead flesh, I ascend to a soar and a rise.
Though skeptics may make mockery and laugh,
and haters judge me for my faults and despise
me for my failures: my hope I shall not compromise
I lean on the Psalmists' prayers as on a staff
(the way, in Egypt, Patriarch Jacob, did
from whom parts of the future were not hid;
past and present, as well, as fully secured
by reliance upon Christ, God's salvific Word).
J-9thxciv
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ah I've found you
it's hard for me to keep up with your name changes!
I apologize for your
I apologize for your inconvenence, but I am flattered that you looked for me.
J-9th94
Wow... just... wow... so bold
Wow... just... wow... so bold and glowing with conviction! I love the last line in particular where it all resolves so perfectly well!
The song lean on me comes to mind, but it is a poor superficial effort on my part in describing what you have in this one line supernaturally. Even better is the first couplet which absolutely heralds in a loud trumpet the glorious hope! Incredibke lines i am unlikely to ever forget! Testify! Best blessings ss
Bravo!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you very much for that
Thank you very much for that excellent comment, I really appreciate it.
J-9th94