CINQUAIN-Crumbling

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the sea

a monument

of my vast dreams, nothing

but sandcastles; as the tides creep –

I break.










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Violet Carolina's picture

kind of a sad tone. in reality, if you are writing such interesting stuff...i hope that "break" is a good one, where dreams smack open and you glow knowing you gave something your all and were good at it.