you, seem to hold a promise between your hands incandescent, burning in the irises of your eyes whilst i, slipped my hold upon the moon as i, carry a sleeping sun on my forehead.
A play on words and metaphors to come up with imagery.
Excellent imagery. Well-written and graceful.
i'm curious about the sleeping sun on her forhead...anything more you can tell me? if not, that's okay. i really liked it.
Excellent imagery. Well-written and graceful.
i'm curious about the sleeping sun on her forhead...anything more you can tell me? if not, that's okay. i really liked it.