the shoes

i’ve been wanting

to wear

they were now


to me

i tried them


they wouldn’t


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Do we desire something that was really not meant for us?  

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Ernest Bevans's picture

A brief but powerful statment
on the nature of our things and
our desires. This is a brilliant piece

Keep Writing - Keep the Faith

Shell Trees's picture

i didnt quite get the drift of this but once someone took away my dancing shoes and my life ....trees....

Violet Carolina's picture

This is awesome! We need to talk. V. : ) please write when you can