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“Pitch black all around
Was how my life looked
Until you came into it
And brought me light.”

Nah, that’s too cliché

How about:
“I was just fine
Before I met you
And I didn’t even like you much at first
I thought you were cute
But I didn’t like your attitude
Yet you grew on me
Like a rose growing onto a stone wall
But the closer I got to you
The more I could feel the heat of a fire out of my control
It wasn’t that you loved me
It is just your personality
To burn those closest to you
But I couldn’t leave
I had fallen for the flames
And though I sometimes danced in your inferno
I couldn’t help but to come out burned

We’re opposites, you and I
For where you burn
I am ice-cold
So it didn’t hurt me when you left
Not as much as you would’ve felt
But I still want you back
It’s not a pain
But an ache
And the only thing that can melt my heart,
That can teach me to love again
Is you.”

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

Love, love love!

How you began this poem,
and what emotion!!

"I had fallen for the flames
And though I sometimes danced in your inferno
I couldn’t help but to come out burned"

Ugh!
Favorite! ^.-


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Seraphim's picture

It seems like that happens

It seems like that happens everytime, and every scar brings back a memory, of just how things used to be... Thank you for the kind words.

~Seraphim~


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Jesster's picture

This is real beautiful and

This is real beautiful and sad seraphim.


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Seraphim's picture

Many sad things are

Many sad things are beautiful... so I'm told. Thank you

~Seraphim~


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