crystals gray lie
reposed rest prolonged
trembling stirring rising
flight carrying away
whispering frigid movement
racing quickly on
plucking pulling lifting
water stored in a way
wavelets rolling softly
retaining sunlit warmth
peaks foaming splashing
stolen warmth flying up
transparent fountains ascending
gushing racing high
frigid stratosphere cooling
turbulent rolling flow
vapors condensing forming
castles dreams can see
whiteness filling darkening
heaviness crashing descending
shearing tearing descending
breeze torn to shreds
grabbing tearing carrying
roaring across the land
pounding harshly hitting
splashing droplets flung
smashing crushing forcefully
drenching tearing down
droplets forming puddles
filling to overflow
seeking flowing downward
quickly race across the land
Flowing streamlet’s gather
swelling creeks do grow
rushing in to rivers
flowing into the sea
dim grayness fading
beaming light swells
sparkling grains like diamonds
flashing now in the sun
You captured, with evocative
You captured, with evocative visuals, pounding rhythm and tumbling structure, all the breathtaking drama of a storm, from the first ominous stirrings to the return to light: the "sparkling grains like diamonds". An impressive depiction of nature's fury and promise.