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Who wants to come get fucked with me?
I need a little less dignity
I need some more spontaneity
Come and waste your cash with me
Take some pills and laugh with me
You people bring me down, down
And I want to get out, out
Of this boring town, town
I’m ready for something drastic so let me go now
I need to spend my money on expensive clothes
Go out on the town when I have no cash at all
Take every single chance to see a band
In the shittest little venue but it don’t make it bad
Spend that last fiver on a beer filled cup
If I don’t know all the words I just make them up
I need to be out and to have some fun
Others are mundane and I know no one
That wants to take a chance and dance with me
Your boredom’s kinda boring so I guess I’ll leave
You’re such a wallflower up inside that club
You need just to relax and to have some fun
You say you like the impulse but that’s a lie
I aint scared to say, so why don’t you try
To step into the street holding you hands high
Scream something out to make you feel alive
Who wants to take a chance with me?
Who wants to come dance with me?
Who wants to pop some pills with me?
Who wants to go out and get fucked with me?
Who wants to lose their dignity?
Who wants to act on spontaneity?
Who wants to waste their cash with me?
Who wants to get high and laugh with me?
very good for someone so young
"I DO! Can I please?!"
GREAT poem, loved every bit of it, well done on such a brilliant piece of writing.
Could relate to EVERY line (tho I don't actually do pills either and I never have, but I've done most other drugs, I just never got into pills tho, if you're meaning E's, 'cos there's been plenty of other pills that I HAVE got into in the past! I'm all clean now tho, and don't intend to touch drugs again, apart from my 'scribed meds).
*phew*, sorry for the rant! But at least it's hopefully let you know that I can identify with your feelings in this piece... people who are SO 'mundane', especially those that THINK they're not but in actual fact they really ARE, I can't stand some of those people!
I could actually write long comments about every single line of this amazing piece of writing you've done but for your own sanity, and so as not to turn your critiques page into my own life story, I shall end it here!
Once again, great work, well done.
TAAvSM x