Author Information
The Promise
He always gets hurt....
Yes yes indeed
Alone in the dirt
He'll live but he'll bleed
So how does she feel?
Oh boy I don't know
Why'd she have to steal
Something broken long ago?
Such a pretty liar
Yes she's good at playing
She'll burn in a fire
Never intend on staying
Lies lies lies all day
Here this merry man sits
She's going away
He loved her to bits
hi
hi. it was nice to read it from a different persceptive. i'm used to the girl getting hurt, left in tears, etc. fact is not only do men lie, cheat, and betray women, but some women do the vary same thing to men. i don't like it either way, but this poem was a change of persceptives and i give you credit for it. keep writing.
Thank you
I don't have the best of luck but I make due with what I have, besides that, thank you