New brooms sweep clean

Where is the rodent

Where is the room

Where is the floor

Here is the broom

 

The aggro crag drops molten slag

Tasmanian Devil drinks

Torn asunder from proverbial blunder

Calloused man thinks

 

A strange case shall fray today;

Absence makes the heart grow wander

 

 

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I Hope

I was supposed to laugh at what absence makes because i broke up. Surprised. Nice write - witty - Lady A


 

 

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Thanks Stella

Just messing around here.  Proverbs & anti-proverbs.  New brooms sweep clean, but old brooms know all the corners/know where the dirt is. 

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I felt like I found myself at the end of Haiku there...


Much Love

Ashley

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Fairy Tale Like Too

It was wistfully. written. Fun inside a serious subtopic, the joke was emotion capturing and worth a second read. ~Star~

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