Interstellar Crewship Controller

Light their faces up

That rainbow joy alights

Illumination from behind

Stained glass window eyes

 

Intent like Santa's arrival

A good word reaches out,

Giving words of praise;

Bright star burning soul

 

Articulate if the situation arises

Like a samurai above the words

Sweet as an apple blossom

Beauty of sun after storm

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Sorry it took so long, for you Stella!  ;)

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KindredSpirit's picture

Like this too

True.

KS

bishu's picture

Futuristic poetry

Great to know you Mr Jones

 


©bishu 

 

schmuckjones's picture

Thank you Bish

It feels disjointed and rushed to me after reading it back.  Written in a sleep deprieved state.  I might change some things about it.  In all honestly, I only wanted it to be the last four lines, which were the first.  I never know when enough is enough.

allets's picture

I Am So Honore

"...Like a samurai under the words..." thank you. - Stella


 

 

schmuckjones's picture

My mistake

I had an internal conflict with that phrase during inception.  I'm sorry.