Break Me, or I'll walk

Washing the sediment from my eyes

a spectral ghost has to be so quiet

how quiet to feel the medium

how silent to touch the sadness

meloncholoy drape of such serene peace

The great divide encompasses my drive

The love I deny the void thru I climb

A lifeless ordinary on hearts highway

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You know what? Some would say

You know what? Some would say this piece was a litle here and there or disjointed.  Not for me this went down like a silky smooth velveteen warm soup! Every word followed perfectly after the next.  The ideas moved exactly as I wanted then to through the ether;  through the concrete, through the emotional and through irony.  Great piece!  In ny mind as I read it felt so right. Cgeers Ss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thank you SS

It's been so long since I wrote something, I almost forgot about this.  A lot of my stuff is disjointed, I feel.  Again thanks for a word and letting me know I still resonate. :)