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I want to Love You

Not intense, like a hurricane rain.

But practical, like a warm stream.

To give you joy and comfort.

Cause you hurt, I know it.

 

It will be gentle, you will see

 

No need for reciprocation.

I want it to be fleeting.

Cause the war on love is never over.

As long as we are sleeping.

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

If you find my words falling upon your words... please understand, nothing but respect.  Although, I can be short-sighted and dim-witted.  Nothing but respect.

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©25 February 2015 - 11:48pm — schmuckjones
12 March 2015 - 11:12pm — AziVsH
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I Like This

It's a pleasant thought. 

13 March 2015 - 12:40pm — schmuckjones
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Thanks a bunch

AziVisH.  I like your profile pic.

14 March 2015 - 4:42am — AziVsH
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Thanks!

Thanks a bunch! I like yours too, it made me laugh:) Also, my name's Aislinn. 

27 February 2015 - 6:57pm — deepinyourdreams
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I like this one...short,

I like this one...short, sincere and make a point.

"Deepinyourdreams"

27 February 2015 - 7:45pm — allets
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The Last 2 Lines Rock!

There is that whimsy again, light strokes on heavy matters - nice love poem, the scope awesome ~Star~

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27 February 2015 - 8:07pm — schmuckjones
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Thanks a bunch!

Indeed those last two.  I can't believe Jah allowed me to pull them thru the ether.  Sorry, listening to reggae right now.  :)

28 February 2015 - 12:06pm — SSmoothie
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Loved the authors comment

Loved the authors comment too! ;)

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

28 February 2015 - 8:40pm — allets
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Listening to Ragae

You go Mon! No apologies needed for dah south of dah border jammin'. I'm a classical/jazz listener - Empire's rap is driving me off - so I hit the mute button - yeah I known, it's changing the face and the future of pop - Pop rocks is a candy. :D ~Star

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