Sunset in a Jar

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Fantasy

Look at the sunset in a jar,
a magic gloaming in the glass.
It's vision is cast from afar,
glorious beauty unsurpassed.

What a beautiful illusion,
captured in these miniature beams
at the dusky light diffusion,
so save some for your nightly dreams

It will last just for a moment
although, soon the sun will then set,
it's a universal bestowment,
the best one that you might find yet.

It was angled to perfection,
making it appear in the jar.
a moment for pure reflection
before the sunset says au revoir.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

8 syllable meter

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Please forgive my previous

Please forgive my previous comment for failing to acknowledge the beautiful rhyme scheme on which this poem is constructed.  The rhymes ring like delicate chimes without intruding upon, or disrupting, the lines' grammatical sense.  Bravo!


J-Called

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Thank you

Ron,

So nice to hear from you.

I hope you are well and doing well with all of this pandemic.

I'm surviving.. lol  thank you for dropping by and saying hello.

 

I appreciate that very much! 

 

 

 

 


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my pleasure,i think i have

my pleasure,i think i have covid but it hasn`t killed me


ron parrish

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What?

R u okay. tested, vaxxed? b ok.


 

 

word_man's picture

like saving time in a

like saving time in a bottle,,hope yoy are well my friend


ron parrish

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Beautiful emotion told in

Beautiful emotion told in beautiful quatrain stanzas.


J-Called

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Hey

Thank you very much for your time and consideration to comment on my little work.

Much appreciated!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words