Fair Winds And Following Seas



On fair winds and following seas

your words were captured on the breeze

Causing me to sail the seven oceans

to come drink of your most magic potions

Balmy breezes in the moonlight

bring sweet nothings to my ears tonight

Sending my mind to new places

to drink in deeply of heavens traces

Swirling oceans and gathering surf

washes over my body bringing new birth

Forwarding my soul towards glory

where the clouds will tell the beautiful story

Rolling tides with frothy white horses

taking me to a place where its power forces

Calling me home to where my heart belongs

as I listen carefully to all its songs

Susie

*LadyPoet*

© July 2003

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Susie:
This poem is so beautifully written with word selection so so awesome.The visualization on this poem once again is so so intense-can actually smell the salt air -feel the ocean breezes and taste the salt water. This poem is truly so so beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Dave Richardson
7/07/03