On fair winds and following seas
your words were captured on the breeze
Causing me to sail the seven oceans
to come drink of your most magic potions
Balmy breezes in the moonlight
bring sweet nothings to my ears tonight
Sending my mind to new places
to drink in deeply of heavens traces
Swirling oceans and gathering surf
washes over my body bringing new birth
Forwarding my soul towards glory
where the clouds will tell the beautiful story
Rolling tides with frothy white horses
taking me to a place where its power forces
Calling me home to where my heart belongs
as I listen carefully to all its songs
Susie
*LadyPoet*
© July 2003
Susie:
This poem is so beautifully written with word selection so so awesome.The visualization on this poem once again is so so intense-can actually smell the salt air -feel the ocean breezes and taste the salt water. This poem is truly so so beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
7/07/03