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Thoughts Life,
Not like what it seems,
You can never understand what does it means
Love,
A thing you feel,
But it'll give you a wound that will never heal
Dream,
A vision you see,
lets you see and feel what you want to be
Time,
Runs up to death,
It doesn't stop till it snatches your breath
Very true poem. I like short poems myself.
Sometimes a writer continues to write, and
gets lost in his verses. Says too much, or
repeats himself. this is a nice length.
i like this one
this was good. it was very true~ i would just suggest delving into it more and make it longer.
really dig deeper. i think its good but it could be amazing~