Speak of love, and love will speak
Love will seek to perish weak
But do I speak of such deception?
Let's go deep with each perception
Let's look closely in our consumptions
Scornful eyes of lost assumptions
Let's speak truth of the emerald society
The trace we face is but our physical anxiety
An unfair trade with the deepened much played
With indignant oppositions to the faults of the blade
Let's care not of our wrenched emotions
But of knowledge with despair in our shameless demotions
Let's be clever with immoral states of shore
I'm an odd for an even, where the justice is my core
And the river of irreverence has drowned in the ocean
And the ones of such ignorance are false in devotion
Teach the lacking young, the importance of oppression
Be clever with the tongue, and veil the lies of every lesson
A contemptuous obsession of the hand in all depression
Remove the clenched impression, for its place is in suppression
Pride is but washed in the calm of our wave
In our wave must contain but of sin we engrave
We engrave such corruption in the ones we shall save
In our save must contain the uneducated brave
Slavery will beg in the need of compassion
To act on disobedience is truly my passion
Teach me the rules and the purpose of power
Talk of such fools who will fill us in our hour
Speak not of much in the needle of affection
Ones of all but touch are misguided each direction
Protection of infection, injection we shall give
The dead will never die, as the alive will never live
Written By: Sarah Ahmed
Well first off, the structure
Well first off, the structure is sound. The rhythm is beautiful and flowed very nicely.
The actual poem itself is magnificent! I loved it...and the theme..in a way....reminded me of Batman o:
Well done! So beautiful. I look forward to reading more. :)
~Soul