The eerie yellow light before the storm,
The sky in various tones of darkening grey,
Tree tops bowed in strengthening air currents
Send a message to stragglers this day.
Booming thunder echoes 'cross the sky line
Mumbling, moaning, groaning in its distress.
Tethered dogs begin their incantations,
The darkened atmosphere begins to press.
Hordes of flies cling to nearby surfaces,
The hot air becomes dense and hard to breathe,
Heavy drops begin their crazy rhythm
Until the ground begins to wetly seethe.
Crack! goes lightning 'cross the murky heavens
Splitting them asunder with seeming ease,
Calling attention to the firmament
Visible now and then through weaving trees.
Madly, badly pours the invading force
Conquering, laying siege to native life forms
And amid this pounding, driving, hard beat
Nature plans its rebound from the wild storm.
Excellent personification..excellent mood of violence and gripping force. I could clearly visualize the storm you portray. Excellent work!
Summer Storm
Edifying comment. Thank you so much, I really appreciate your evaluation.