When the Southern Cross weds
the Crescent Moon..
which cradles some of
its stars..
then we see a symbol
of the Heart of God..
which enshrines
all God's children
.. Muslim Christian
Hindu Jain Buddhist
Jewish atheist
.. equally
SATURN KNEELS
Saturn Kneels
Saturn with all his rings
kneels before GOD
.. who is beyond the time,
the duty, the constriction
of the planet of will.
I truly like your work. You've got some rare talent. I hope my great grand children may read your works one day. Keep inspring and writing.
May He who created the earth...continue to bless you with words.
I love this piece. It is a stroke of genius. I especially like the way you repeat "equally" at the end. Usually the things most easily seen have the greatest potential for inspiring hope. After this poem I won't see the stars or the moon the same again. Thank you for sharing.
Darron