twisting and turning
writhing into oblivion
sitting as i ponder
what is the meaning
too much
so little time
too many questions
not enough answers
there is a light at the end of the tunnel
hope
obstacles block my path
broken promises
unfounded theories
and a past newly unburied
for the soul to grieve over
tormented
my soul does not make it
the tunnel is my grave
oblivion
Ooh. I loved this one, for sure. Very good use of vocabulary and connotation.
i like this one your very good. your poems tende to be sad unlike mine wich are usally angry lol well see you later hope to read more about you.