My Life

my life it ended in the blink of an eye

i didnt even realize how fast it flew by

i was so naive to think it would last

but now all i do is think of the past

i watched true love come and go

love made time seem so slow

i saw my life through a looking glass

full of hatred and unfinished tasks

i look back now and see my mistakes

like pointless summers sitting on lakes

ive been stabbed in the back countless times

and wrote poems about it with witty rhymes

i realize now that life is a game

and i try every day to live without shame

my life is a story worth being told

will you share it with me and watch it unfold




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Saturnine's picture

I've been where you've been and seen what you saw
The world full of pain- bloody and raw
The savageness of intentions so innnocently placed
And the well seeming kisses better with each taste.
I've been where you've been and felt what you feel
The agony of lonliness and shadow that can kill.
I heard the sobs in your voice just the same
If you listen closly you'll know it's not a game
In agame you can win, there's a trick or a code
In life everyone loses themselves or someone close.
The tears are in everyone's voice listen closely and you'll hear
Everyone needs that someone to hold dear.

-Saturnine

don't give up, it may not be the best but at least you're still here.

Laura Campos's picture

Wow !, Great Poem, I Was Left Speechless On This One, Keep It Up :)

~*Laura