Handful of words

Handful of words


Daunting task of whittling experiences into words,

Competing with boundless creativity of young blood striking chords.


Forgive this skeptical fool, my spirit wanders wild

I confess to be an imbecile with the heart of a child


Attempting to gradually transcend tragedy into comedy,

Where villains steal the glory and heroes are rendered giddy.


I intend to explore realms where most things are kind

And re-instill that fickle love can broaden a narrow mind


Whilst painting painful pictures of heart-ache fused with sorrow

Pouring out the gargantuan grief of bleeding hearts I borrow


In my subtle ambition of creating silent verses that elicit tears

As with a handful of words I whisper my deepest fears.

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bishu's picture

Profound Wisdom from a wee little girl..... To be candid

Profound Wisdom from a wee little girl..... To be candid ,I stumbled onto your profile a short while ago.I wish you all the best in all your endeavours.Be Happy.


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

I enjoyed this totally. You

I enjoyed this totally. You explain here what makes good poetry. The unspoken that touches depths where the reader refuses to go within them...the parts they are in denial of. Picasso's pieces of abstract art touch people because he exposed his craziest perceptions in them, whereby helping others to see the very same craziness was within them, creating a unity on an issue that is scorned, judged, and thought to be "abnormal". 

 

You said it with such flair. Loved it.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

allets's picture

subtle ambition and silent versei

What I truly enjoy about your rhymed work is that in front of those rhymes are solide concepts for contempation, impeccable grammar, and images that are enviable - most enjoyable read child morphed poet  ~A~

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