Lust

                      Lust

 

Fond of her flaws

Molding into perfection in his eyes.

He shed his casing to flourish

into a magnum opus in disguise. 

On the edge of insanity

She stood ecstatic with sadness  

His incarceration indulged her

Into an abyss of ignorant bliss.

Aroused his fingers fondled

The contours of her body

Wrenching at the cruel fetters

She appraised a hint of shoddy.

But his clout grew bolder

Slicing through her naïve skin

She bathed in the beauty of

that paranoid despicable mandarin.

 

He was born sinner. She died, redeemed.

 

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Moonshadow's picture

Not bad!! Not bad at all! ;)

Not bad!! Not bad at all! ;)


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

corey521's picture

i like the title of your

i like the title of your poems

Saachi's picture

And does the poetry live up

And does the poetry live up to the titles? 

corey521's picture

um..no i dont think so but i

um..no i dont think so but i do like the poem itself but i also liike the title so yeah i mean the poetry dont live up to the titles i guess..

Saachi's picture

Fair enough.    

Fair enough.

 

 

corey521's picture

aw thanks

aw thanks

nightlight1220's picture

Lust certainly will have its

Lust certainly will have its way with those who push it aside as something of a toy, and without purpose. After all...a lot of stuff in those "bond" movies is not just "in the movies"!! :-D

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Saachi's picture

Truly said. Lust is probably

Truly said. Lust is probably the most intense of all worldly passions. "It demands, it militates, it tyrannizes". 

Haa. Now don't bond movies just about sum it up. 

GOHIL48's picture

beautifully written. loved

beautifully written. loved the very last line.. you use very strong words.. and it makes your poems sound more lovely.. and i wish i could write like this :P

Saachi's picture

You give me more praise than

You give me more praise than I deserve. Thanks indeed.