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@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; AutumnShrine, A Young Man From Kyoto [ /;\ ]
Shoeless, shirtless, you
are well aware the way your
beauty vivifies
your baggy blue jeans and your
semi-sheer (very soft) socks.
Kyakuchuu
Shoeless, shirtless, you
are well aware the way your
beauty vivifies
your baggy blue jeans and your
semi-sheer (very soft) socks.
Kyakuchuu
I love the explosive subtlety
I love the explosive subtlety of the words "very soft". No need for any more details. The reader knows. That trust in the reader's understanding and imagination, in my own reading experience and humble opinion, is what elevates good poetry to the realm of great poetry.
And what a killer screen name! Adoring that.
Wonderful work. An image etched with delicate fire.
Thank you very much. Your
Thank you very much. Your comment brought some real sparkle to my day, which has been, otherwise, rather unopleasant medically.
Your words always encourage me to continue on with the series. If my meds were as effective as your words, I would not be in this present situation.
Starward
I’m troubled by your
I’m troubled by your situation and praying that you feel better soon. Even in your distress, you find the most gracious and kind words. Thank you for your generous response.
Thank you for your kind
Thank you for your kind words. I spent yesterday morning n the ER, but I am feeling much better now.
Starward