@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; An Athlete's Story

His athletic skills stood him in very good stead

during seventh through ninth grades---when he was

well qualified for Junior Varsity athletics, 

Football, the starting quarter back.  All three

years, he led his team to victory and local titles.

But for sophomore year, which, in that district, was

considered to be the entrance to High School and to

Senior Varsity athletics, his long hair, cascading

well below his shoulders, was considered a disqualification,

according to the Student Handbook For Athletes (the

1925 edition).  Many of the same who criticized bis hair

length, considered me a myopic bookworm---the kid always

picked last for a team.  Circumstances, in their rather

subtle way, brought us together.  Now, in my parents'

backyard, we toss the football back and forth; he is

shirtless, clad in baggy jeans, and barefoot.  He has

asked me to wear his class ring on a chain around my neck.

Societal expectations, and the prejudice of old prudes and

haters, should not suppress our bodies' urges, and the need to

love and be loved according to our given natures.  We are

going steady, he told me, and nothing shall interfere

with that.



J-Called

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What makes this genuinely

What makes this genuinely moving is the magnetic pull between two opposites who turn out to be one soul on the same journey of acceptance and fulfillment. In spite of great opposition and high-stakes disapproval, love finds a way and becomes something unbreakable, enduring, even sublime.

 

A tender, deeply touching story with a strong sense of place and time. Always a pleasure to read these additions to your series.

 

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Thank you so much for

Thank you so much for understanding and validating my purposes in this poem, and in this series.  A comment from you makes such an encouraging effect, and thus the sequence continues.


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