@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; To Basho, In Praise Of His Young BoyFriend, 04 [ /;\ ]

Find that small cleft in

the Peach's lower rounding;

your fingertip knows

that centerpiece---not to be

invaded, but gently teased.



Kyakuchuu

 

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What an effective visual! It

What an effective visual! It has delicacy and dignity, yet still smolders. The illustrious Basho is nodding and wondering: now why didn't I think of that?

 
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Thank you for interpreting

Thank you for interpreting that poem far beyond what I thought I had written; I am more pleased with it after reading your kind comment.


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