The Real Deal

You ever get that feeling,

The one where you feel weird inside,

Well I always had that feeling when I looked at you,

And I never knew why.



But now it's all so clear,

I know what they mean and what the do,

They show me the path through life,

And they show me that the path is you.



I had never been in love before,

And I wasn?t expecting it now,

But there is only one word that could describe how I feel,

And that word is wow!

Not wow, cause I fell for you,

But wow because of all the things you do.



I knew you were something special,

The moment I laid my eyes on you,

And now I hope we never part,

And you?re always my baby boo.



Now her eyes are a beautiful hazel,

That seem to shimmer and shine,

And I?ll tell ya this,

I could gaze at them till the end of time!



Her laugh is so cute,

And her smile is so pretty,

For all you other guys,

For you, I have pity.

Because you?re missing out,

On a wonderful girl,

She means everything to me,

She?s my world.



And I can?t wait to be with you,

For the rest of my life,

And baby I can?t wait,

For you, to someday, be my wife.







I wanna say so many things,

But the words, they don?t come out right,

But I want you to know if ever need holding,

I?ll hold onto you tight with all my might!



So this is the end of my poem,

And I want you to know how I feel,

Now all you out there as well as my special girl,

I want her to know that I love her,

And this is the real deal,

I can see us being together.

You and Me for the rest of my life,

And I can?t think of anyone else,

Who I?d rather have or who would be a better wife.



So baby listen here,

I love you with all my heart,

And I hope we never end,

Or have to part!

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Bridget Williams's picture

This is so well written....it is beautiful....the flow is amazing.....shes lucky! Great write!

Gabby C.'s picture

I like this.. ive felt this before. awesome poem. hit me back (or IM me if you have AIM- WildPengwin69)

Tessa Bailey's picture

Ryan, you are the sweetest thing! We've haven't talked much lately but I was checking out your website and your girl is one lucky little thing! I hope we can stay in touch because you are a great person and your so fun to be around! I know you still might be mad at me but it's cool because I understand. I hope school is going well for you as well as football. I will talk to ya later.. tess