Born home in peace and seen the sun I everyday,
I never understood, what, what is it that I am missing in my life,
I went to search!
Now exposed to hurricanes and earthquakes that I was able to engender,
I ran,
To see houses flooded, torn apart - in pleasure,
I see the house of my evil neighbor, collapse of shaking never seen before,
I smile and enjoy his cry for every second I had heard it,
But when it came my turn,
Like I revelation it was opened in a moment, I remembered peace, my home where I was born,
But no one was around me because of evil in me I was unable to control.
I ran again, but now the other way,
Looking for my home and peace,
But nothing was in place,
In destruction, failure, shame,
I fell down to my knees,
I shouted out to God, “save me, for I am nothing,”
Expecting no response, but still with very little hope,
He touched me and I had seen my little home, far above the skies,
I felt the peace I had never known,
The hurricanes and earthquakes stopped,
Now I am old, ending my slow walk home,
I understood, my true calling never was - control.
Very Well
I liked it alot. Keep up the good work!
Like this
interesting viewpoint.
favorite line: "my true calling was never to be in control." keep writing!
*tallsquirrelgirl* she feels in italics and thinks in CAPITALS ~henry james
Thank you :) We'll see, I
Thank you :)
We'll see, I wrote this poem in a few minutes... Literally for no reason.
I had to do my homework, instead, I started writing a poem xD
IMO
Their were some mistakes.
But I rather liked the poem
And the message it conveyed.
Very believable.
KS
Thanks!
Where did you notice the mistakes? I will be more than happy to make corrections!