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    Hold me in your arms of nonbiased confrontation

    Let your wisdom seep deep into my soul

    Grow me like a bonsai tree

    Cut to perfection by your experience and words of truths untold

    Shape me into my own beauty unfolding

    Redirect me with benevolent guidance

    A strong and loving hand moving me against the wind

    Until I stretch myself open

    Reaching up towards the sky in a twisted, tangled, tormented way that only I can bend

    Hold me in your nonbiased arms of confrontation

    Letting my roots run deep to my soul

    So my formation can be a testimony to humanity

     

     

Author's Notes/Comments: 

:) I started a writer's group today, not one that reads each other's work and edits it, but one that talks about life, writing, and things, inspires one another, holds one another acountable for goals, and gives that wind beneath the wings all writers need :)

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Beavis's picture

;-)

Thiwhen tire poem is amazing, but this line, "Until I stretch myself open

Reaching up towards the sky in a twisted, tangled, tormented way that only I can bend"

is an example of why I always pull over to read you! ;-)

 
running_with_rabbits's picture

;)

:) <3

 

I am glad you enjoyed it, got the second meeting of the writer's group this week soooooo excited!


Much Love

Ashley

thisisme789's picture

Online? If so, I'd love to

Online? If so, I'd love to join ;D

On your poem: It is very deep and heartfelt. Wowie... I can't really think of much more to think...


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running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks hun   sadly no the

:) thanks hun

 

sadly no the writer's group is in person but maybe I should make a facebook group for online nextworking...


Much Love

Ashley

INKSTAIN's picture

If only... Great words. I

If only... Great words. I wish to find this place you write of so warmly and elegantly.

running_with_rabbits's picture

:) Ink... I have been writing

:) Ink... I have been writing since I was 8, taking it seriously since 13, I am now 28. They say when you truly want to master something you must put it 10, 000 hours of practice on it and that at least 1000 hours will be bad. Just keep writing and you too will find the place were you bloom like a cherry tree in japan :)

 

and thank you so much for your kind words


Much Love

Ashley

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I LOVED this, Rabbits!

I LOVED this, Rabbits!


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running_with_rabbits's picture

:) thanks hun I like the

:) thanks hun

I like the group ;)


Much Love

Ashley