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Mac Duff is still my favourite (he kind of looked like you)
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I saw Macbeth today
Our play
With newly shaped eyes and enough distance from your love to enjoy it
Appreciate it
Respect it again
I watched every second
Hung on every word
Sat still despite the movement in my mind
With one broken lover on stage
Another five people to my left
And you as you have always been
Tucked in the recesses of my heart
I sat still
Watched every second
And I wanted to wash you from my memory like Duncan’s blood from Lady Macbeth’s hands
But the spot remains
A stain upon my womb
Scars where our fetus broke lose
I saw Macbeth today
A scar where the foetus broke
A scar where the foetus broke loose
a scar where our foetus broke loose
def our for me
the provides detachment
Our provides a connection...
Hope this helps
Ps i think "a scar"because a stain upon my womb (great line) didnt sound quite right to me lyrically followed by scars where - ...
Although I like it trust something... I ont know but I love this poem! And... Macbeth any Shakespeare actually :D n hugss strong poem!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:) thanks smoothie will keep
:) thanks smoothie will keep that all in mind
I used stain because of the conecction to the play
Much Love
Ashley
I love the fact you used spot
I love the fact you used spot and stain! Perfect!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
:)
Much Love
Ashley
:)
:)
Much Love
Ashley
"free"
OMG!!! This one also goes in recommened reads!!! I first read it at work and that was the end of my reading for the night! I was distracted all night!!!
BTW, you are absolutely right in fretting over the wording. I can't saying which is best, though I have my preference, but the point of poetry is to pack the most potential into as few words as possible, so world selection is critical.
jeeze luise Beais! don't just
jeeze luise Beais!
don't just leave me hanging there! whih is your preferance man! lol
and I may move it to rr
Much Love
Ashley