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Use Only Between Kitchener and Toronto for the purpose of loving me
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2012 A purse filled with grey hound tickets that I will never use
Tainted with visions of us tight between my covers
Entwined like lovers
Full of hatred and regret
Marked like a dead man walking
Moving towards a hand of opportunities
Disembarking from diseased waters
Limited like the lines of definition in our relationship
Use only between Kitchener and Toronto
Be serious until done
A purse of Grey Hound tickets at my side
Freedom in my soul
Guilt somewhere in my heart beside my feelings for you
Left in the trash can at Union Station
This this brilliant!!!
This this brilliant!!! Get off your a$$ and come up with an appropriate Rabbit title! What would you say if I wrote something this amazing and didn't come up with a title? You are the Title Queen!!!! The Zen Master of marrying title and poem!!! Love ya!!! Hugs! ;-)
I am trying Beavis lol
I am trying Beavis lol
Much Love
Ashley
;-)
And for you, I will wait patiently until every star fades from the sky ;-) Let it take as long as it takes ;-) Hugs Dear ;-)
:) there just for you oh man
:) there just for you
oh man I have like 20 poems to type and post, you are gonna be in for a treat soon my dear!
Much Love
Ashley
Sweet! I cant wait!!!
Sweet! I cant wait!!!
Absolutely love it!!!
Absolutely love it!!!
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
now what to title it
now what to title it
Much Love
Ashley
Titles
I read the poem, I really like it. The poem has good flow and storey. As for the title, a teacher told me we could take part of the poem it self. Part of a phrase, or something that describes the poem all in one word is another way to title it. Thank you for sharing.
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I am an artist of words as well as paints.
:) yea I tend to do that when
:) yea I tend to do that when stuck but this one has me stopped dead still
Much Love
Ashley
Same sentiment
http://www.postpoems.org/authors/roc/poem/940832
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
Title?
~Use Only Between Kitchener and Toronto~ is my favorite line to select as title, the irony abounds since the tickets are unused - Read it three times, but loved the typo in the current title, the connection is surreal - Lady A
:) oh allets I do adore you!
:) oh allets I do adore you! thank you for your comment and I agree I think that is the title! It also matches the relationship, it's like the tickets are use only between Kitchener and Toronto for the purpose of loving me....
Much Love
Ashley