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I cried in my kitchen again
Today
Doing dishes in a summer dress
Face flooded like the tap around my hands
So I don’t think it was the onions
I think it was you
The fact that somewhere
Deep down inside near the surface
I still love you
And I don’t know what to do about it
Once again, so beautiful, and
Once again, so beautiful, and so emotionally charged! You capture every once of tension and emotion of the moment, the past tension and suspense of what's to come. As always, wonderful writing that touched my soul.
I tyhink I get it! I was
I tyhink I get it! I was crying in the kitchen while writing both poems, so it captures it because I was in it! ;)
Much Love
Ashley
You are not giving yourself
You are not giving yourself enough credit. We have the advantage of being able to see the beauty and power of your poetry, while being insulated from the personal experiences that give birth to it. Because of your skill and talent, your poems transcend merely being a personal chronicle and become emotionally universal. And your skill with that scalpel makes the cut so exact and deep ;-)
beavis that comment almost
beavis that comment almost brought me to tears, you are too amazing my dear!
Much Love
Ashley
I'm just trying to get you to
I'm just trying to get you to see your work with my eyes ;-)
I do not think I can handle
I do not think I can handle seeing my work through your eyes, it's intense!
Much Love
Ashley
Agreed!
Agreed!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
no as funny as this sounds it was the onions!
Both connected beautifully by this thought and of course you and your wonderful talents! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
smoothie I just need to stop
smoothie I just need to stop cutting onions when I am thinking about how I feel, I mean i know that if I thought about how I felt without onions there would be no tears but... ;)
Much Love
Ashley