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I need a title for this feeling that I hate
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2012
I can’t erase
The way it pulls when I see your face
The ping of pain
Felt in my soul when I want you again
The slow and simple melody you always seem to play with me
I won’t ignore
The subtle undertones of whore
The hinted sex
And all its cause and effects
The mess this could make of your current mistake
And so I’m stuck
Between a bus and a transport truck
The end so near
Standing stagnate; paralysed head to toe with fear
Caught in your web and planning my escape
I love the poem and the title!!!!
I can relate to every line almost~ keep up the brilliant writing doll. ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:) smoothie my dear I <3 you
:) smoothie my dear I <3 you
Much Love
Ashley
pretty powerful
been there, two words come to mind when i read this poem. Paralyzed or Crossroads. i think either would be a fitting title. lemme know what you come up with. you're a beautiful writer, keep it up.
:) thanks
:) thanks
Much Love
Ashley