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2015
“He was right”
She thought
As she picked the iPod off the floor and placed her Sennheisers upon her ears
Her eyes became clichés before she registered the sounds
“Don’t you believe, girl, that you change the world, at least you change the world for me”
And it only took a second for her to realise that
He was right
Still she sat there
Clichés in hand
And told him he was wrong
It might be asking too much,
It might be asking too much, but if you have time can you add to this? Or build off it. I love this concept and your work is just so good.
:) wow, thank you
I am really gald you enjoy my work..it's not asking too much, I am just not sure how I would add to it, but Iwill put it on the list of things to do and hopefully come up with something
Much Love
Ashley
I read a lot of your stuff
I read a lot of your stuff first before registering.
Why you?
Straight forward. Why not?
I liked this piece.
I can relate
:)
thank you dear, glad you are on the cite!
I hope your relation is less painful than mine was :/
Much Love
Ashley
I went back
Which I don't like to do
But this was my first comment
Including to U
3 weeks 3 days
I hope U are doing well Miss
:)
I am thanks, aside from exams :/
Much Love
Ashley
I Love This Piece
dialogue, thought vs what is said, ethical dilemmas - ENCORE! U Rock ~slc~
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:)
thanks love :)
Much Love
Ashley