::More Than A Feeling::

You turn my senses on high

Tickling and lingering on every nerve

Caressing the sweetness of every curve

It's more than a feeling

You sing to my heart

Loving and lazy you stretch my soul

Bitterly fragrant you fill me up whole

It's more than a feeling

You protect and guard me

My body as it is yours

Bound like gravity to me you serve

It's more than a feeling

You touch and invade

No patch of flesh undone

Leaving me breathless and totally spun

It's more than a feeling

It's a notion

It's a spirit

It's rapture and ecstacy

It's chemically

Breathlessy

Mentally dense

It's velvet and steady

It's subdued and daring

Endless

With no floors or ceilings

It's all of me

It's more than a feeling

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SSmoothie's picture

Great work here! love the way

Great work here! love the way you use words!
"It's chemically
Breathlessy
Mentally dense.
It's velvet and steady"
I love the Boston song with the same title which drew me to this piece! incredibly delightful! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

roxyanna77's picture

Yay!

Boston was thee inspiration! So glad you recognize that. =)

Beavis's picture

Damn!

Erotic and romantic at the same time! Tough to do, but beautifully done here! I love it! Great writing!

roxyanna77's picture

Thanks!

I can always count on you to remind me I'm not completely wasting my time... I appreciate you!!

Beavis's picture

You are so not wasting your

You are so not wasting your time! You are a talented poet. It's who you are, whether the world recognizes it or not, you need to keep writing, always! Besides, as long as you keep posting, I'll be reading. I love your work! ;-)