You turn my senses on high
Tickling and lingering on every nerve
Caressing the sweetness of every curve
It's more than a feeling
You sing to my heart
Loving and lazy you stretch my soul
Bitterly fragrant you fill me up whole
It's more than a feeling
You protect and guard me
My body as it is yours
Bound like gravity to me you serve
It's more than a feeling
You touch and invade
No patch of flesh undone
Leaving me breathless and totally spun
It's more than a feeling
It's a notion
It's a spirit
It's rapture and ecstacy
It's chemically
Breathlessy
Mentally dense
It's velvet and steady
It's subdued and daring
Endless
With no floors or ceilings
It's all of me
It's more than a feeling
Great work here! love the way
Great work here! love the way you use words!
"It's chemically
Breathlessy
Mentally dense.
It's velvet and steady"
I love the Boston song with the same title which drew me to this piece! incredibly delightful! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Yay!
Boston was thee inspiration! So glad you recognize that. =)
Damn!
Erotic and romantic at the same time! Tough to do, but beautifully done here! I love it! Great writing!
Thanks!
I can always count on you to remind me I'm not completely wasting my time... I appreciate you!!
You are so not wasting your
You are so not wasting your time! You are a talented poet. It's who you are, whether the world recognizes it or not, you need to keep writing, always! Besides, as long as you keep posting, I'll be reading. I love your work! ;-)