In a valley in a field
in the forest and in the water
there is something I'm trying to find.
i look and look
i move the leaves
lift the rocks
and clear the dirt.
its a nice moment of work.
after it is clear I see a branch.
Its roots were too deep to pull
and to strong to cut.
I studied that branch thoughtfully.
then walked further into the horizon.
I looked back at the land,
so different since my intervention,
and noticed paint on my fingers.
i ran back to the branch and held it.
it alone i could not alter and it alone held me to earth.
remembering my search I closed my eyes.
i remarked I was finished and returned home
unnerved and Unsatisfied.
in the night I came back but all was different
and another rested on the branch.
at first i felt defensive.
soon the realization came
it was another me
painting on the shared canvas of life.
What a terrific painting of
What a terrific painting of life... Very beautiful concept for a poem. Enjoyed this greatly... Wish there was more to read... But I'm sure more masterpieces will be developed soon. Would love to read more!
"A poem is never finished, only abandoned" - Paul Valery