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DID SOMEBODY...?
Did somebody knock over
Your tower of Oreos
Before the judges
Could even see how high it goes?
And did somebody
Just kick you in your face?
Laugh at you,
Or put you in your place?
Did someone hurt you?
Did someone break your heart?
Did someone reach inside of you,
Tearing you apart?
And did somebody say
That you don't deserve to live?
Did someone try to take away
Much more than you could give?
Well,I am not that "somebody"
Who put you through such pain,
But I can be the "someone"
Who can take it all away.
Absolutkey beautiful...Much Luv, Jay
wow u sound like your a great friend. and not only that ur a great writer.
I really enjoyed this poem, especially the last couple lines of it! They brought the poem to a very strong close that reinforced the main idea.
Great job!
Keep writing!
I really enjoyed your poem....that was wonderful...
You make a very good point with this poem.How much better it is to be someone who upbuilds rather than someone who tears down.Fine poem.
Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.
That was a really good poem and it shows that you arent just another ordernary person you actually have feelings...youre a really good writer never loose that
Sent Chills down my spine.
Very good rhyme and meter and the message was a breath of fresh air. Good job of getting your point across!
Jessica
This is an excellent poem, it's true in many ways.